Fear Not California

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we did free translation in english today, thats when you get something that in a different language and you have to translate it by yourself, I think the original was in Latin, but I only know a few words. here was my translation, nothing like what it really is, shame though.

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Fear not California
One day I’ll be gone
And you can go back to the fun in the sun
And the winters will be peaceful
As palm trees sway steadily in white christmas postcards

Fear not California
I’ll embrace you again
For as long as I stand
I’ll dream of fun in the sun and the sand
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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I'm always a sucker for California poems...
:sighs: makes me think of home.
I loved it.
when there's nowhere to go, it's time to grow up.




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I love this, very good. No critque.
***Honorary 11-Year-Old***

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Short and sweet. Good work.
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I'm with them all others... err... yup.

Quite dandy, I think. Very good. Excuse me while I go browse through your inventory for more.
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