Flags of Writing

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Armadian
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Fri Apr 22, 2005 10:15 pm
Armadian says... · Fri Apr 22, 2005 10:15 pm
Always try to rhyme,
never stop on a dime,
write all the time.

Never be cruel,
thats the rule,
always go to school.

The flags will wave,
kids will behave,
and all right to the braves.
The flags they wave.
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Rei
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Fri Apr 22, 2005 10:31 pm
Rei says... · Fri Apr 22, 2005 10:31 pm
Not sure I like it, but I enjoyed the spirit behind it. Careful about choosing words just because they rhyme.
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Duskglimmer
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Sat Apr 23, 2005 12:45 am
Duskglimmer says... · Sat Apr 23, 2005 12:45 am
The last stanza confuses me. I'm not sure what exactly you were trying to say.
The robbed that smiles, steals something from the thief. ~William Shakespeare, Othello
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