I saw...

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I saw a rooster in the mail
I saw an envelope in jail
I saw a convict planting seeds
I saw a farmer playing with beads
I saw two babies jump a hurdle
I saw a horse wearing a girdle
I saw a lady cut down a tree
I saw a lumberjack making tea
I saw some maids fixing a leak
I saw a plumber with a beak
I saw a friend who saw these things too
And said, though strange, they were every bit true.
"Half the time the poem writes me." ~Meshugenah




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Note: It makes perfect sense if you put in punctuation in the right spots: "I saw a rooster. In the mail, I saw an envelope" etc.
"Half the time the poem writes me." ~Meshugenah




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Ohhh! Haha! Cute. ^_^ I would have never gotten that, had you not put in that little Note. Even without the correct punctuation, it was actually quite entertaining. Everyone's all topsy-turvey (spellling?), which made it really fun. ^_^ Nice work!

I enjoyed every line. Keep writing!!

~*Sydney*~
Formerly known as Silly Sydstix... as well as Aquarius Angel.




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Thanks!
"Half the time the poem writes me." ~Meshugenah



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