I love this! It's so original and a break for the drab and boring story ideas. I got it all, and found it exellent how ya made us think she'd been run over. I found this was really well written and I hope you keep this prologue it's such huge potential. I've never seen this idea before. I've a question to ask why is this in fantasy? I love it but I'm confused by that. I love the first line starting with a her thoughts. It's lovely I really can't help saying how wonderful this is. Please continue it. Please! I want to read more. *Goes to hunt for chapter 1*
Good luck
VSN
