Daydreams before dawn

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I love this! It's so original and a break for the drab and boring story ideas. I got it all, and found it exellent how ya made us think she'd been run over. I found this was really well written and I hope you keep this prologue it's such huge potential. I've never seen this idea before. I've a question to ask why is this in fantasy? I love it but I'm confused by that. I love the first line starting with a her thoughts. It's lovely I really can't help saying how wonderful this is. Please continue it. Please! I want to read more. *Goes to hunt for chapter 1*

Good luck
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XD Sorry! No chapter one. My plans for this (I have a plot even) got sidetracked when the Spider Venom sci-fi story came to me. Which was then sidetracked by Diary of a Villain. So right now it's on haitus, but I'm glad you liked it! I thought it was a cool idea as well.

lol. Oddly, this is a lot like the way I think when I am walking to the school bus. =P I keep imagining the people in their cars are just waiting for me to get behind them so they can run me over as they pull out. >_>

^_^ This is in fantasy because in the next part the story goes fantasy on us, though it would be a bit of a modern fantasy. Sadly, I haven't gotten that far. Diary of a Villain has priority. But I'm so glad people enjoyed this, knowing that I'll be more likely to come back to it sooner. :D

^_^ Keek!
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