Here's a cute little poem!

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I wrote this in the 4th grade like a long time ago..wanted to post a poem so....

Garfield is my cat,
He's really really fat,
He's so lazy he drives me crazy.
All he does is sleep sleep sleep,
but when I shake his food box he comes running with a leap.
Even though he'd rather sleep then play,
I will still love him every day.
Quarrels would not last long if the fault were only on one side.
--La Rochedoucauld

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This is really cute it sure cheers me up when I am freezin and bored at the same time in school.They are taking ou t windows
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Awwwww! I agree, this is really cute and your cat must be soooo adorable!

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i thought it was very cute :!:




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Oh yeah, the perfect "I love my cat" poem.
Please, sit down before you fall down.
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It actually got published in this book of young writers poems or something like that. I have the book too. When I posted this I didn't expect people to read it but I was wrong. Thanx for critting or whatever you want to call it.
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it was a very cool poem (love cats have 2 many) but when you say Garfield is that your real cat
or is it the Garfield in the comic books?




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OOH I LOVE GARFIELD. My friend had a stuffed one and I thought it was real until i went over. She told e I couldn't see it because it's tail got stuck in a vent. What i ended up; seeing was this large round ball of fuzz in a shoebox with masking tape (aka bandages) on it's tail :P




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Lol, funny poem :lol: I got a question. Can we write free style poems?
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Yep
Quarrels would not last long if the fault were only on one side.
--La Rochedoucauld

"An unexamined life is not worth living..."
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'All he does is sleep sleep sleep'...

Very nice. :wink:
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That's really cute. I want a cat! Actually my two lard arse dogs are perfect, I love them tons, but I still want a cat. . . .and a duck.




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Hehe! I love this! Very cute. :) If only my dog would sleep instead of constantly bugging me to play frisbee with her.. :P
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