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I've really been lazy lately, especially where crits are concerned so between now and the seventh of January, I'm going to try and write another thirty reviews because that's a nice number. That's roughly three a day so give me links. Your work or someone else's work, I don't mind which. Post them here or pm them to me and I'll make an extra effort to be in-depth.
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Awww...you are so nice. Thanks! So, can we submit more than one link? Well, anyway, here is my first section of Field Trip

topic20683.html

Thanks so much, Kitty!

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I'm really impressed with your dedication. I'm trying to get more crits in at the moment too, but doubt I'm gonna manage a mean of three crits a day (I mean, I'll try, but I doubt I will ;)).

Since you're asking (and since, in actuality, I'm rather shameless) a review for Chapter One of the Broken would be amazingly appreciated. ^_^

(Oh, and psst: I think you mean January 7th, not December 7th. ;))
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BBB - Yeah, you can submit more than one link. For now, I'll limit people to three each but if I don't get enough requests, I'll pm you.

Sureal - Yeah, I meant January. Lol. Thanks for catching that, I'll edit my post.
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Yay, I was helpful. ^_^
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Oh, very cool! If you could review my story, here are the links to Chapter One and Two:

topic23528.html
topic23809.html

Thank you very much. If you can just get to one because of reviewing other peoples, that's fine. ^.^ Thanks so much!

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Great idea! I'd appreciate if you reviewed this for me - thank you!!

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You. Are. Amazing. My limit is around two crits a day and I usually don't do any *blush* I have one I just critiqued and she's a newbie. She has an interesting writing style that I think you'd like to see.

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There, that's four so far. Behind schedule but that's okay because I have very little planned for tomorrow so make sure I have at least another two or three links by the morning! Here or my pm box is fine.
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Argh...I don't wanna feel selfish, but I haven't really gotten any constructive feedback on this. Any advice would be helpful!

topic23815.html

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Wow, awesome.

Here's one of mine: topic23889.html

I wish I had the dedication to do what your doing, Heather. You rock!
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I've nothing worth your critterly attention at the moment, but I would like to say how wonderful of you this is - is very rare that people just up and offer any and all crits. So. I'll cease to ramble. It's nice. ^_^




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Hey Heather,

this is awsome!!
I'd really like you to take a look at a poem of mine. I am not sure about it at all..

Here's the link:
topic23934.html

Thank you so much!!

All the best

~Kalli



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