Critique exchange

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Fangala the Flying Feline
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Sun Dec 02, 2007 6:57 pm
Fangala the Flying Feline says... · Sun Dec 02, 2007 6:57 pm
Anyone up for a crit exchange? I'll review any one thing in your portfolio if you review any one thing in mine.

Come on...how can you pass up an offer like this?
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Emerson
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Sun Dec 02, 2007 6:59 pm
Emerson says... · Sun Dec 02, 2007 6:59 pm
I'm going to move this to the lounge... Doesn't really fit here. Eh. Ish.
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Gadi.
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Sun Dec 02, 2007 10:37 pm
Gadi. says... · Sun Dec 02, 2007 10:37 pm
Okay, let's EXCHANGE!
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Icaruss
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Sun Dec 02, 2007 10:42 pm
Icaruss says... · Sun Dec 02, 2007 10:42 pm
I posted the exact same idea in the Writing Activities section and nobody answered it. You guys suck.
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BigBadBear
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Mon Dec 03, 2007 6:00 am
BigBadBear says... · Mon Dec 03, 2007 6:00 am
I wanna do it!!! I'll go and critique something right now!!!


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Would love help on this.
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Fangala the Flying Feline
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Tue Dec 04, 2007 2:32 am
Fangala the Flying Feline says... · Tue Dec 04, 2007 2:32 am
Aw, I'm sorry, Icaruss! If I had seen your post, I would definitely have responded to it.
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Icaruss
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Sat Dec 08, 2007 8:39 pm
Icaruss says... · Sat Dec 08, 2007 8:39 pm
It's alright. I'll play, though.

Wanna have a go?
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Lancrist
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Tue Dec 11, 2007 5:10 am
Lancrist says... · Tue Dec 11, 2007 5:10 am
If you're looking for another critique I'd be happy to swap.
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Fangala the Flying Feline
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Wed Dec 19, 2007 5:19 pm
Fangala the Flying Feline says... · Wed Dec 19, 2007 5:19 pm
Whoa, I haven't checked this topic in forever! Sorry, guys. I'll get right on those reviews.
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