Thunderstorm

Anticipation.
Great dark swells of scorn and hate
I wait for fury.




Wasnt exactly sure which catagory a haiku would fit under but hey give me a break, after all I am only a newb

That was awesome!
Usually I dislike Haiku's, but that was totally cool. I loved the way you described the swells/clouds. Also, the part about waiting for fury was pwnful--like waiting for lashing rain, right?
Anyways, great job!
Keep writing,
-Ayra

P•S•- I see you're new to YWS! PM me if you have any questions or want a critique!