A poem about the lynchings of cattle kate and her husband

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There once was a man called Bothwell,
he was not very thoughtful,
he hung two people,
not in the steeple,
for them it did not end well.



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Well, that was...interesting...!
It's a little short, so I can't give you an in-depth review. :(
However, the rhyming near the end sounds quite bizarre...
Well,
Cheers to random poem about people being hanged,
Narf,
-Ayra
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became everything i lost.


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you see the assignment was for history and was suppost to be short.

^_^ :D




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MIsa like-ish...
I think you should keep on going. Its kinda short

You said:
you see the assignment was for history and was suppost to be short.

Oh...

Well its nice!




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you see my teach told us to use aabba form and well I tried.

I got a 17/20 for a grade. Not to bad.




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This is a limerick, right? Well, it's pretty good, but "Bothwell" and "thoughtful" don't really go, and the last line was too long. But it was a good original idea for a poem! ^_^
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thanks. it was my 1st lymeric. not bad huh? :D




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HAHAHA!

THAT WAS HILARIOUS!
Awesome job. I just don't like the last rhyme with the "well".

So aweome job.
my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away




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thanks! I thought it was funny too, but when my teacher showed as a video about what happened it made me sad, back then if you where thought to be a cattle rustler then you could be hanged illegaly!

this all happened in Wyoming before proper law was brought.

poor Kate and her husband, evil bothwell!

anyways thanks for the comment! :D




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Oh, it was supposed to be short.
In that case, Kudos!
It was cool...and for some morbid reason, I enjoy reading about people being hanged. :twisted:
everything i loved
became everything i lost.


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ummm...thanks!

I do kinda enjoy people being hanged too, to read of course!

if you want more of my hangings read One without fear chapter 2! :D




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Ok, I will! xD
everything i loved
became everything i lost.


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thanks and I hope you enjoy it. :D



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