Your poem was very deep and thoughtful. It was very good.
The only thing you need to do, is add puncuation, and capitlize. It made it difficult to read. Which i found sad, because this poem has alot of potential.
[while trapped in a bucket of popcorn] You know what the worst part is? It's not even butter. We're gonna be destroyed by... ARTIFICIAL FLAVORING! — Blake Bradley, Power Rangers Ninja Storm
