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darkdove
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Tue Nov 27, 2007 6:17 pm
darkdove says... · Tue Nov 27, 2007 6:17 pm
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Maki-Chan
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Wed Nov 28, 2007 1:53 am
Maki-Chan says... · Wed Nov 28, 2007 1:53 am
well this is interesting. I never read a poem like this before. I like it. I enjoyed it very much, continue your work. :D




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lysolstinks
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Wed Nov 28, 2007 3:58 am
lysolstinks says... · Wed Nov 28, 2007 3:58 am
Your poem was very deep and thoughtful. It was very good.
The only thing you need to do, is add puncuation, and capitlize. It made it difficult to read. Which i found sad, because this poem has alot of potential.

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