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I've Got the Blues

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You gave me the blues.
Yeah, with your last review.
I don't mind if you tell the truth,
but honey do you have to sound so rude.

I'm gonna use "I've got the blues."
Yeah, cause it's a great old line.
If you don't like it.
Well that'll be just fine.

"I've got the blues."
Yeah, but I ain't cryin' over you.
You can read this and say you like it.
You can read this and say you don't.

I don't care what ya do.
Whether you say you will or you won't.

I is used in this song, but I'm not selfish and thats a fact.
You is also in these lyrics.
On the computer we have to watch how we act.

I'm not being mean to you.
No, I just wanna lay everything on the line.

If you like this song, great.
If you don't, that'll be just fine.

"I've Got the Blues." Yeah, yeah.
Writing is my thang. But you can express yourself in so many different ways.




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This is great, the topic needed to be touched on, i feel the same way. this is well written and you got your point acrossed. please dont take the rudeness from people to heart, it is but one person's opinion. it in no way should affect how you think of your writing.
i think you are good, keep going.

kim



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