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Rate the Signature Above You [2]

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5/10. Neutral.
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8/10

Cool. Makes me want to look up the song it's from. :)
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7/10. Heh. Quite funny.
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not much there...

21/2-10
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1st: Meh, it's all right. 2/10 for the arrow.

2nd: 4/10 He should walk away if they don't believe. He's just wasting his time otherwise.
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9/10

lol funny
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Um, what? That's just random. Are you obsessed with pickles or something? 3/10
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yes. omg! your evil 8/10 evilness rules!
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5/10

Too many exclamation marks, but big points overall. Nix the caps and marks and it'll score higher.
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Funny, but the names mean nothing to me. 7/10.
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TL G-Wooster wrote:1st: Meh, it's all right. 2/10 for the arrow.

2nd: 4/10 He should walk away if they don't believe. He's just wasting his time otherwise.


its a song about God so I hope he doesn't walk away

and for the above siggy 6/10
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If it IS a song about God, than he SHOULD walk away from those who don't believe. Because they probably don't want him pushing his religion in their faces, as Christians are wont to do.

Plus, my mind keeps hearing:
Sheeee's not the cheatin' kind
But she's been cheated one too many times...

2/10
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1/10

i hate math
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1/10.
Sorry :D
It was slightly immature.
Had I the heavens embroider'd cloths,
I would spread the cloths under your feet.
But I being poor, have only my dreams,
So tread softly, for you tread on my life.




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ummm

4/10
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