My life

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My very first song I wrote. I think I was in Gr. 6.

My life

1 part

Now,now,now
This is my life
I didn’t know that
It could end like this.

So here it is
Don’t be scared I
Wont be a coward


Feel I can’t go on
It’s to much for me
Yet, I will try.

Will be optimistic so
Don’t ask why.

(Chorus)

This is my battle
This is my war
This is my life
This is my soul.

I will go on
I will suffer
For you…for you

2 part

I’ll always wonder
Why I didn’t come for you.
Life is strange
Don’t know why but,
I’d rather go with you.

(Chorus)

3 part

So Ill try!
And I’ll fly
Don’t you cry.
You were made to shine.

(Chorus) x2

Goodbye.
Look at my big shiny shell...




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That was such a great song you wrote. I feel like there's meaning behind it.

Just make sure to check your spacing.

Overall, it was amazing!
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I love this! It's so simple but it has a melody...it's sort of like Cecilia by Simon&Garfunkel but it's also We Will Rock You-ish. I love this. I was singing the whole song. Amazing!
my world isn't only beautiful
it is so far away



i enjoy repeating things twice in poetry. but only ever twice. nothing tragic ever happens thrice if i have control of it
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