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So, you might be wondering why I put this here, but I shall explain.

We need to descide what is going to happen. It is much better if we have a basic idea of where we're going before we write. Obviously the plan is to assassinate the king, but here is the question. Will we succeed? What will happen? What about after we kill the king? Will the people rally to us as leaders or fight us? We need to figure out what's going to happen so let's get some ideas rolling :P.

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Last edited by greenjay on Fri Oct 05, 2007 6:56 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Come on. It would be good if we could at least have a basic idea before we start with the assassination.
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Sorry I didn't see this before. I say we sucseade, but someone dies in the process. That might work.
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Hmm...who should die? I could. That would probably work :D.

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That wouldn't work, there goes the motive to continue, then again, who could die?? I mean, unless we made up a new charactor, or someone who hasn't posted in a while or something, I don't know.
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You guys could kill off Tobias if you want to. He's only a secondary character to me. Now, what to do with Tucker and Whitelight.....

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I have a thought though...when do storybooks end? When we get tired of them? I think if we had a nice big long assassination thingy with many complex twists and stuff, we could end it with Mathias's death. It could close with a new head (and maybe even king of the Kingdom of Zynar too) being appointed. Then I could do some basic grammar/spelling editing and it could be a made into a story (with you guys's permission of course). It would be cool I think. What do you guys think?

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Yea, then we should like start a continuation to it, like maybe years later and their kids :D :P
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Ooo, that sounds fun :D! Tis a good thought.

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Is a very good thought. *visualizes* Peace of Zynar! or, or Zynar: A New Kingdom! Wow, I like sequels ^^ We could get more people to join, too! :)

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That's a good idea. Also, what if Tas takes over the Kindom for a time until a proper replacement can be found. he keeps peace and order as the Kingdom is rebuilt, with the new ruler being your new character.
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Ya, Tas could be the new king and there could finally be peace between Xnrom and the Rogues :smt041 . Anyway, I don't know about the new character, but Mathias could die and either Alana or Quin could become the new head. That would be good I think :D.

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You can't just drop out of the story, that is no good at all!!! So are we going to go into the future and end this as Tas being king or what?
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Well we wouldn't really go into the future....here's my thoughts: the king is assassinated with much dificulty and cool action (:P), but the head dies "heroicly" in the procees (he's kind of already to evil to redeem himself, but dies doing the best he can, perfect right?). Then Tas is made king and peace is made between the Kingdom of Zynar and the Rogues with their new head who, I'd say, should be either Alana or Quin. Yey, throw confetti, be a little sad on the account of Mathias's death (a good blend); and I say we end it with that.

Whatdya think?

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MATHIAS SHOULD HAVE A KID!!!!! *calms down*

Secret wife? Eh? Eh?

Quin could be Head, Sirius could be married to her, Tobias..... haven't figured him out yet, maybe he could go down with Mathias.

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OH YEAH! I forgot, maybe there could be a fight. Mathias's kid could want the throne but since Quin is already up there..... Eh? (I feel so Canadian)



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