Glowy!

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It is great for a first attempt. As others have already suggested colour and brushes [stars/glitter/etc] would imporve it.
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Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins