Critiques (Who wants one?)

Okay, so I have two weeks before I return to college and [s]I'm trying to avoid my homework[/s] I'm a really lovely, caring person so I'd love to take a look at all your work. The only rules are no more than three critique requests from each person and please don't shout at me if it takes a day or two for me to post the critique because I'm not sure how many requests I will get.

Other than that, either post the requests here or, if you'd rather not waste your points, pm them to me.

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I would be very grateful if you could have a look at my poem, link above.

I'm also up for a return critique if you want one =)

Uh... If you wouldn't mind, my three newest on Unknown Story in Fantasy Fiction. I don't really know how to make a link... Sorry...


~Pol~

Done Firestarter and not the best critique but seriously, it's such a great poem that there's so little to pick apart. As for a return critique, I already owe you for looking at my sister's art. She'll be delighted when I show her your comment!

And no problem Poltergiest, a link isn't essential.

Thanks! =)

A Winter Memory

Thanks a bunch! ^_^


MM

If you're still offering, I'd most appreciate it if you could look at my audio drama:
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and of course I'd be happy to return the favor if you ever find yourself in need of a crit ^_^

-melia

Um... I would really like a critique (if you can) of the article I posted ages ago in the non-fiction section. It's called 'The President of Iran Is Sick And Deranged', but it has little to do with him at all.

But, if you would prefer a story, I've got a long short story concerning a murderer, an eager young copper, a depressed old detective and alcoholism. It's really good, I think at least. I can e-mail it to you.

It sound like you want to I'm doing you a favor. So, I'll make this clear:

Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, puh-leaaaase critique my unworthy writing!

=D

Magic - Would you like me to look at the picture you posted too? I think I will...

Amelia - Yes, I'm still offering and if you'd like to return the favour, a short comment on my sister's art work would be nice and that goes for anyone else who's feeling so inclined. It's not everyone's sort of thing though and I must warn you that the siren's naked...

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Icaruss - I'm fine with the non fiction article but I'll probably look at the other too.

Great! Thanks a bunch, and I'll e-mail you the story (I would simply post it, or PM it, but it has some formatting things that won't transfer to the board.

If you want me to critique anything of yours just tell me.

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XD You would be my bestest internet pally.