Lots of Pink! A Crazy Elf!

Yeaaah!

Wow! It's oh-so-pink. I love it. Not really much to say critique-wise. Her boobs are rather big, though.

Ta,
Cal.

Caligula's Launderette wrote:Wow! It's oh-so-pink. I love it. Not really much to say critique-wise. Her boobs are rather big, though.

Ta,
Cal.

I don't see the problem here. Move along

Excuse the sexism, but- typical male.

Something about her right wrist & hand (the one that's pointing) seems off to me. But I'm not an art buff, so I've got nothing.


(helpful, I know)

-St. Razorblade
The Unofficial YWS Pirate

Aside from certain specifics (*cough*), there's nothing that feminine about her. So, unless that was your goal, you might want to soften her up a bit.

Er, yes, her shirt looks a little odd in places. specifically over the boob to the views left. That's just an odd placement of it. In general, you might want to pull the shirt up Oo That's too much boob for me, and for YWS I think XD

Sponson Light wrote:

Caligula's Launderette wrote:Wow! It's oh-so-pink. I love it. Not really much to say critique-wise. Her boobs are rather big, though.

Ta,
Cal.

I don't see the problem here. Move along

Did I say there was a problem?



I do agree with Clau about the shirt.

whence wrote:Aside from certain specifics (*cough*), there's nothing that feminine about her. So, unless that was your goal, you might want to soften her up a bit.

What do you mean "soften" up? What isn't feminine?

I'd say she's pretty feminine in the soft sense. And people seem obsessed w/ the boobs. Well, if you're gonna make them fantasy huge, then you gota make them spherical. NOW THey look like pancakes, they're too flat and long. You could try shading the pic, adding nipples, or go in an do a quick fix, make the add to the length of the torso, subtract the langth from the boobs.

Fantasy boobs... guys want to see them coming out of the picture.

i think it's a cute pic though. the whole "ZOMG" and pink... reminds me of those people that dress up and go to conventions.

Not bad, Very bright to say the least. Her breasts dont even look right. She's too big. It throws off the balance and they are shaped wrong. (Realizes how bad this is making him look but must give a proper crit anyway.)

Other than that she looks like a very chipper teen elf. Or a very sluty adult one.

Edit: The Elf needed a rating

Empress Kat wrote:I'd say she's pretty feminine in the soft sense. And people seem obsessed w/ the boobs. Well, if you're gonna make them fantasy huge, then you gota make them spherical. NOW THey look like pancakes, they're too flat and long. You could try shading the pic, adding nipples, or go in an do a quick fix, make the add to the length of the torso, subtract the langth from the boobs.

Fantasy boobs... guys want to see them coming out of the picture.

i think it's a cute pic though. the whole "ZOMG" and pink... reminds me of those people that dress up and go to conventions.

Well, nips and the aure would be too much, imo (though I did make a version just in case). Plus, I figured the shirt would push the breasts up, as I wanted it a bit tighter.

it looks like somethings up with her right wrist. looks as if its bending backwards or something. im not to sure, other than that the first word that comes into my head is pink what does zomg mean? oh and one more thing if you dont mind me saying her top seems too small or her breasts too big lol nice though a happy looking elf keep drawingxx

Okay, you don't know girls too well do you? What sort of girl wears a top that's way too small with what appear to be rather baggy trousers. If you're going to have her slutty, give her a skirt! And those socks? You must be joking! Also, her hands are rather masculine. Perhaps give her some long, pink nails and more delicate fingers.

As for the face, it reminds me of an old granny cartoon I saw once to be honest. Lol. It's a cute little cartoon though if you put aside certain... aspects.

kitty15 wrote:Okay, you don't know girls too well do you? What sort of girl wears a top that's way too small with what appear to be rather baggy trousers. If you're going to have her slutty, give her a skirt! And those socks? You must be joking! Also, her hands are rather masculine. Perhaps give her some long, pink nails and more delicate fingers.

As for the face, it reminds me of an old granny cartoon I saw once to be honest. Lol. It's a cute little cartoon though if you put aside certain... aspects.

If I drew an orc female, how should I dress it?
I'm planning on drawing one sooner or later.

It depends what personality you want to convey. If she's sporty then in trackies and a strappy top. If she's slutty, perhaps a mini skirt and a boob tube. If she's rather average then jeans and a T-Shirt. If she's older and professional, try a business suit or if she's younger perhaps a cute little dress. Feel free to pm me about it actually or post the sort of personality you're considering here.