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How demonic. I like it very much. I have a hard time with her legs. I dont think they would be that thick, even though they are...goat's legs.?

This is really well drawn. A little more shading or some colour would be nice but that is one cool outfit and the detail on the wings is great. I have to agree that those legs are a little thick, especially in comparisson to that tail but in general, it's really good.

I'd really like to see it colored but otherwise, that is so cool!

Why are one of the "hooks" on the wings not finished? I love how th wings look kind of torn up, it's so neat. And it's a nice mix of animals and human.

Claudette wrote:I'd really like to see it colored but otherwise, that is so cool!

Why are one of the "hooks" on the wings not finished? I love how th wings look kind of torn up, it's so neat. And it's a nice mix of animals and human.

It didn't scan the whole picture, thus, it cut out the top of the hook. I drew at an angle to fit it all in so rotating it also mighta done that.

This is really, really great! I love all the detail and the shading is great and everything is just...great. Lol.

Usually I don't like these kinds of drawings, but I do love this! =]

My random mini-critique:

It seems like her right wing has been placed higher than the left one. Excellent job on the boobs and costume! Though her legs are goat's legs, they seem a tad bit too stuby. She has an elegant, long torso, then legs that look like they can't even support her. I love the drapery and her expression. The hair seems a tad bit choppy. I don't know... It just doesn't seem to have the whimsicle feel that hair usually has. The left horn is higher than the right. The right shoulder seems placed a little far back, as does the arm. Other than those iddy bitty details, I see nothing wrong with it. Its a seriously rockin' peice A question:

Do you have a deviantART account?

Oooohh I like this. I agree, though, I think the legs are slightly thick.

~Inkblot

Very fun. You should shade it or ink it or something. It's a nifty picture, just clean it up, finish it. Could be AWESOME.

Wow, I love your style, especially her face/expression. She looks really fierce. You take commissions? XD

I agree that the wing in the back looks like it's placed a little higher, but that may just be because of the angle. Her legs, though - they do look a *little* funny. I guess it's partially because of the way the "knees" are positioned, and the fact that they look kind of short and squat compared to her elongated torso.

Great job, though. I would love to see this inked/colored!

Lynlyn wrote:Wow, I love your style, especially her face/expression. She looks really fierce. You take commissions? XD

I agree that the wing in the back looks like it's placed a little higher, but that may just be because of the angle. Her legs, though - they do look a *little* funny. I guess it's partially because of the way the "knees" are positioned, and the fact that they look kind of short and squat compared to her elongated torso.

Great job, though. I would love to see this inked/colored!

I don't see why I couldn't take commissions. Though, don't expect 100% down to the dot detail of your specifications.