The Sminks

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Meep
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Tue Sep 18, 2007 3:28 am
Meep says... · Tue Sep 18, 2007 3:28 am
That was really cute! It was very Suess-y, and I liked it. :)

Your rhyming was good, except for
AetLindling wrote:The Sminks are quite nice,
The Sminks could melt ice,
But despite their best attempt,
To all possible friends they're exempt,

which is a little forced (especially second set).

Other than that, though, it was really sweet. Keep up the good work!
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Thu Sep 20, 2007 12:28 am
Aet Lindling says... · Thu Sep 20, 2007 12:28 am
Staring_at_ceiling wrote:*giggles*

You actually posted this?

Teehee. Silly Aet. ^_^

But really, I Lurve it! ( And I seriously giggled :O )


Lots O' Luv,
Lindsay

Yeh, I actually posted it.
man hands on misery to man
it deepens like a coastal shelf
get out as early as you can
and don’t have any kids yourself.

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