4 Haikus

Hi guys. I'm new here. I relocated from TYWC which seems to be a wasteland. I learnt about haikus and became intrigued so I tried my hand at some. Tell me what you think - Lou

SAVAGENESS

Within savageness,
Nature of fierceness and hate,
Lies the aesthetic.

SPRING

Bright yellow and gold,
Amidst the splendor of green,
Sweet flowers of spring.

TIME

The stillness at night,
Gives way to morning's delight
The passage of time.

TREES

The gods' masterpiece,
Engulfs the world with green,
The wonder in trees.

All so pretty! wow really pretty Haikus...I can only find one fault with them and it's so pendantic sorry but in

TREES

The gods' masterpiece,
Engulfs the world with green,
The wonder in trees.

This haiku the second line had six rather then seven syllubles. I think it was my least favourite also. but the others all very very good. impressive.

Yes they are pretty, and I liked them, and your last haiku has six syllables.

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Um . . . isn't haiku plural just "haiku?" Just a thought . . .