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Daddy Say's He Loves You

chocoholic · 2007-06-01T01:23:12Z

I wrote this a while ago, but it's one of my favourite poems. I hope you like it as much as I do. Daddy say’s he loves you, Mummy say’s it’s true. Sister say’s it’s not rare, Brother doesn’t care. Most friends in the dark, Best friend try’s to help, But when you’re all alone with him, All you do is yelp. Nothing will ever stop him, This you know is true, And you’re lying on the floor, When he’s finally through. You’ve never been to know, If he’s drunk or sober, But the pain will go on, From November to October. Every night you cry, And beg for some release, But you know it’ll never happen, Until he becomes deceased. When that day happens, Will you be happy or sad? Sure he beat and hurt you, But after all, he was your dad.

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Tue Aug 26, 2008 1:38 am

Princess says... · Tue Aug 26, 2008 1:38 am

This speaks the truth for millions of girls all over the world. i love the way the poem contains meaning and emotion! i really feel for anybody who gets that kind of abuse nightly.. :cry:

its not pity though. no worries

I came into this world wrinkled and ugly. And no matter how much I accumulate here, it's a short journey. I will go out of this world wrinkled and ugly. So I enjoy life.

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Tue Sep 02, 2008 11:13 pm

Dark Star says... · Tue Sep 02, 2008 11:13 pm

AMAZING! i really have no words to describe how beautifully written your poem was. it was very intense but at the same time not to a point of being draged down. It just bursted with emotion and feeling. quite a touchy subject but you sure gave it justice. well done!!!

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