I'm here to recritique! Yay!
So, I read the new version, most of it I liked. I read the old version for comparison. Stanza 1: I like the old version better. (And were you missing "The" before "confines" in the newest edit?)
Basically, that is all I have to say. I don't know what happened in my brain for me to get it, but reading the first stanza, I got it. Then I read it again. And I got the majority of the poem.
I'd say the only stanza I didn't get is 3, but I like it so =)
Sorry I can't say more? I enjoyed it this time over. Odd, isn't it?
