Home is where I stand

It left me hanging,
Backwards I rode
Two on the tracks
Smashing free, I'm alone.

Said you would see me
on a warm summer's day.
You know you had me slipping
Not here, but farther away.

People knew more,
and had their alibies.
I didn't think much
of all the lies passing me by.

I knew you were changing,
But I couldn't let go.
I broke your promise
and I flew home for me.

CHORUS

Home's where I stay
Home's where my heart belonged.
Home's where my ache was,
Home never did me wrong.

I knew you wouldn't like it,
But Home is where I'll stay
I thought alot about it,
Bottling up my broken heart....
At the end of a day.

END CHORUS

We were catching the moon,
shooting down stars,
hating the sun
we were who we are.

I'll see you
on a warm summer's day
You'll find me
cause home I'll stay.

We tripped over brandy,
we sat on your steps,
Raising the roof up,
And bending our senses.

I knew you had left me,
when the robins stopped their song,
An eerie type of quiet,
I knew it was called alone.

CHORUS

Is this a song? I think that there is a lyric part of this website but I don't know I am new. The words are good. If it was a song I would probably listen to it

It left me hanging
backwards I rode
two on the tracks
breaking free, I'm alone

Said you would see me
on a warm summer's day
You had me breaking
farther away

People knew more
and had alibies
I didn't think much
of all the lies passing by

I knew you were changing
I couldn't let go
I broke your promise
and I flew home

CHORUS

Home's where I stay
Home's where my heart belonged
Home's where my ache was
Home never did me wrong

I knew you like it
Home is where I'll stay
I thought about it
with a broken heart at the end of a day

END CHORUS

We were catching the moon
shooting down stars
hating the sun
we were who we are

I'll see you
on a warm summer's day
You'll find me
cause there I'll stay

When did it all go wrong
I'm over my head treading deep water
i thought you loved me
but now you've got her

I saw you through a window
I was lonely till you got here
I felt so happy
Then you had to disappear

CHORUS

Remember the good times
forget the rest
You know where to find me
'Cause you know me best

CHORUSx2

with a broken heart at the end of a day (FADE OUT)

Wow! I really liked hte first and last verses - they sounded absoloutly magical! The whole song was great and I think alot of people would listen to it if it was sung.

What you could have used to improve it though is punctaution - some lines start with capitials, others don't.

I also like how you kept it longer, but not too long, and also not boring.

Keep writing songs, I'd like to hear another.

This was good, what genre would you place it in?

probably a country song or some light pop