That confused me. I couldn't figure out what it meant.
Can't wait to read the continuation!
Llama 1:"Shh! Do you hear that? That's the sound of forgiveness." Llama 2:"That's the sound of people drowning, Carl!" Llama 1:"That is what forgiveness sounds like; screaming and then silence."
Thanks guys!
Yes, there will be more, though not necessarily right after this little scene. I plan on writing on my theory about when they take over the world, what it will be like. Also what if the members that died survived? Orochimaru stayed? So many ideas. So little time XD Battle scenes are really not my specialty...glad to see I haven't bombed out yet XD
~Sumi
I liked it! Sounds like a good beginning. I like that it's set in a different village other than Konoha or Suna. The character interplay is ok too. I think you just need to explore the main character in teh next few parts of the story and you're good to go!
Good luck and May the Force be with you!
~PN
"Look, Ma. No hands"
"You haven't got a ma."
"Maybe a nice old lady will adopt me. I'm very loveable."
―Fi and Darman
