Lies and Hope

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Loved him I did,
but did I really?
Only I know what I hid
from the people who love
and care for me.

Why did I do such a thing?
Why did I start it?
So why didn’t I end the fling,
when it would have hurt the least?

Did I like causing him pain?
Can I ever be true even to myself?
It only leaves me with shame.
But did I ever really care?

My friends didn’t get it.
I don’t think they ever will
because I am an never ending pit.
They can not see what lies deep within me,
for there is no light there for them to see.

So is this who I am
Is it really so dark and cold within me?
Will I ever find someone that can
and will shed some light on me so I can see
Who I really want to be?
Last edited by Frenchchilla on Sun Apr 29, 2007 5:37 pm, edited 1 time in total.




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Oh my god I love it. It is so full of emotion. I love it. You may want to fix this quote though But did I every really care? I think you meant ever.
Build a new god to medicated to hate
-Marilyn Manson



You never really know how much of you takes residence in other people... We all exchange bits and pieces of ourselves with each other until we're big sparkly collages of everyone and everything we've ever loved
— GengarTheGhost