The Orange T-Shirt

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Ok, this isn't really much in all honesty. I couldn't sleep so wrote this, I might turn it into something but I need opinions!
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My body aches, my shoulders, my legs, my chest. I have never been this cold in my life, yet I’m tucked up in my Paddington bear bed covers and safe at home. I sit up, swing my legs softly across my bed and allow my toes to touch the prickly carpet. I creep over to the back of my bedroom door and lift my red dressing gown off the wooden peg. I notice I am wearing an orange t-shirt, it has the words “Myspace 2007” printed across the front, this is not my t-shirt, it's his.

I wrap my dressing gown around me protectively and slip back into bed. Oh god. I hate waking up in the middle of the night, that’s when I worry about things. Now I’m worried about loosing the one best friend I have because of that boy. I turn over, still shivering and let my head rest against the wall. I especially hate waking up in the middle of the night when I have been drinking. It all keeps running through my head, seeing her kissing him and he was mine. So I go and find her guy and he takes me into the garden. He takes his top off so I wear it. We sit underneath the washing line, its like a tiny castle, the sheets being the whitewash walls protecting us. His lips brush against mine and I don’t feel bad at the time. His lips are not the cliché sweet taste, they tasted of salt, I guess I didn’t care too much as all I could really taste was beer. God knows why I was drinking beer anyway, I think it’s rancid.

“I want to go indoors.” I murmur into his ear. He pushes me back onto the damp grass, pressing his body on top of mine.

“Now you want to go indoors?” He smirks. All that was going through my head was, yes I want to go indoors, the ground is wet and I think I’m going to be sick. But I didn’t tell him that. So I stay out there with him, his lips against mine the whole time. And that’s what keeps playing through my head. Why didn’t I get up and go home? Instead I decided to get back at her. But really ,was it was her who was in the wrong in the first place? She knew that Chris was mine and she took him, is it wrong of me to take the one she likes? Maybe, but I can figure it out in the morning.
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But really ,was it was her who was in...

typo error thing, just thought I would point it out for yah =D

You reallyl like the name Chris don't you??? hehe. So do I, it's cool.

Anyways, I like this story, it's a really good concept, and as always, very good writing =D.
I would love if this turned into something, as long as it didn't interrupt Ice Cubes, because I love that story =D. But hey, if you can do both go for it!

-JC
But that is not the question. Why we are here, that is the question. And we are blessed in this, that we happen to know the answer. Yes, in this immense confusion one thing alone is clear. We are waiting for Godot to come. -Beckett




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Oh haha the people in this are all real so Chris was like, well it had to be that :D
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