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HI! Well I just make my account, and my username was going to be Carmeeno, which is my friend's nickname for me. But I completly spaced and left out the r. Oh well!

My first name is Carmen, and I have been homeschooled since When I was a kid I always said I wanted to be an author, even though I didn't write anything. I guess it just came from my love of reading. So a few months ago I started trying to write stories, but it just wasn't very fun to me and most of the stories ended up unfinished. Then I started writing poetry and discovered I really love it. Since I'm super inexperienced, I came to this site to get some critiques for my writing and to meet some other young writers.




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Hello

I'm sure you could get Nate (the site owner/admin) to change your name if you asked.

Homeschooled sounds interesting, is it good?

I hope you gain a lot of experience in poetry and this site is a big help.
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Welcome to YWS Carmen!

Homeschooled huh? That's pretty cool, how is it? It sounds like the complete opposite of going to regular school.

You're definitely in the right place if you came here for critiques. Just send me a PM if you want me to crit something or if you have a question.
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hi

wow my cousins are homeschooled. do you enjoy it much?

you'll be sure to learn new ways to write poetry and improve it here. there are many other young poets here too so there are plenty of people to meet! :D good luck with it and i look forward to reading it!

enjoy your new place here!
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Hey! I must say, I like your current username, even if it wasn't what you intended! (One of my closer internet friends got her username from a typo she made while signing up for her first forum, and she's kept it since - go figure!) If you really hate it, though, one of the admins can probably change it for you, like Ofour said.

If you do feel you want to return to prose, don't feel discouraged if you don't finish things. In all of the time I've been writing, I've actually finished about ... maybe five things. From what I hear, it's a common problem and eventually you grow out of it. (I'm hoping the part about growing out of it really is true!)
Don't get me wrong, though, poetry's pretty sweet, too. (Even if I'm pants at poetry, myself.)

Long introduction aside, I hope you'll like YWS. (I know I do!)
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Hiya and welcome to YWS!!!

You'll love it here!!!! Don't be afraid to pm me if you need a crit or help with anything...I'm always around!!!

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Alainna
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P.S. Great name.
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Hi Cameron!

Welcome to the site!

I bet this is just teh perfect site for you....so just keep writing and
posting .


see you around.

Enjoy!


~Ani~
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Bonjour et Bienvenue ^_^

It's so good to see a brand new fresh author willing to improve! I hope you enjoy the site, it's a really great place for developing everything that has to do with writing, we have some really great members here.

If you have any questions about the site or how to do this or that, anything like that, feel free to PM me and I'll help as much as I can :-D

Have fun!
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Hi Cameeno, or Carmeeno, or Carmen, or something.... [*Shakes head and sighs, confused].

OK, let's start that again...

Hey Carmen (lol),
What type of poetry do you write? I've tried poetry and failed, so you have one over me already. So welcome to YWS, where poets have an annoying advantage over me. Just joking.
Oh, and at the risk of sounding clíchéd, homeschooling does sound interesting... It's probably not though, is it?
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Yeah I like homeschooling a lot. It isn't for everyone, and there are some disadvantages, but it really works well for me. I probably wouldn't like public school because of getting up early, and it would be too chaotic for me. Some people I know think homeschoolers are isolated loners, but that's not true at all! Where I live, there are a ton of homeschool activties and most of the homeschoolers are really nice. My mom is a freelance writer, she writes articals for the newspaper and sends out the e-mail newsletter for my city's homeschool organization every week. In between writing she teaches my sister Monica and I.

I think I'll keep my name for now cause I don't really mind it. And as for what type of poetry I write, well, I have mostly written free verse although I'd like to try some rhyming poetry.




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Right, so I can call you Cameeno without having to do that embarassing 'let's start that again' thing? Cool. Welcome to YWS!
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Wooo! :high fives Cameeno...er...Carmeno...?Cameron?...Caramel?:

I'm a HS'er, too. I LOVE IT. XD
:hands you cookie with "Welcome to YWS...FELLOW HS'ER!!" on it XD:

Welcome the YWS and try not to slip on banana peels ;) (You never know what that monkey at the bottom of the screen is up to....always smiling! XD)

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Hey! Welcome! I'm homeschooled too. Do you have a homeschool group? Like a co-op?

I hope you enjoy it here. I look forward to seeing your work, and I'd love to help any way I can! See you around the site!

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Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I'm gymnast_789. Hope you enjoy it here! See ya around!




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That's cool. What kind of poetry do you like?



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