word salad

I want to drill holes in my head
and play my brain like a flute
i want ravaging panda bears
to skip on a pond and
dance to the beat of my broken bones
this salad of words I wish to devourer
has bound to me in this darkest hour
time is spinning around me thumbs
causing my skin to go pale and numb
droplets of insanity are
dripping in my mind

Ha ha!!! I love the line about the dancing polar bears.

fun stuff...

It's pretty short, but to the point, and, besides which, it's pretty good. Kinda confusing, but you eventually get it and go 'oh!' It's cool

Hmm not bad. I found it kind of pointless, and that can be good sometimes, but this wasn't hugely interesting. Cute though. Nice job.

though i can see it should be in the 'other poetry' forum, it also has a distant sense of being dramatic poetry.
But i di think it was really cool and slightly weird....

Hee hee this made me laugh, this is a very good poem in my ohpinion. I unterstand its point and the ryhming and rythem were great I'm going to copy this and hang somewhere in my room if you don't mind.