A Day in The Life of a Fountain

Plip.
Plip. Plip.
Plip-plop, plip-plop.
Plip-SHWASH! Plop-KACHANG!
SHWASH! KA-CHANG! SHWASH!
The gleaming metal fountain
Turns on in the morning.
Starts with a trickle,
Like a dove’s coo.
Building and building
‘Till it reaches a lion’s roar.
Its many arms branching out,
Crisscrossing, coming together
To form
Intricate patterns.
Blub.
Plop.
Cling.
During the day,
Children throw coins in the Fountain.
He seems to
Glow with happiness.
Blip.
Shwaaa-shwaaa…
Blip.
As the trees rustle,
Leaves quietly drop into
The jade-like waters.
The Fountain caresses them,
Holding them as though
They are precious gems.
Bloom.
Bloom. Bloom. Bloom.
Bloom. Bloom.
Three pairs of feet slide
Into the sunlit pool.
The Fountain winces,
But he shows no other signs of pain.
SWASH! (trickle)
Fwoop-trickle, SWASH!
Followed by loud guffaws.
Children enjoy an evening water fight.
The Fountain appears to go out of his way
To make sure they get soaked.
KA-CHANG! SWASH!
Sploosh! Slosh!
Drip.
At twilight,
The Fountain suddenly
Stops.
As though he is falling asleep,
For it has been
A busy day.

~Inspired by a fountain on the Stanford campus

I ....like it. I think. I'm not entirely sure as it's...unique.

I do like the wording, I can hear the water plop and ripple and all that, it's rather good. But like I said it's.....unusual. Not bad unusual jsut....unusual.

I like how you chose to personify the fountain. I think the poem would flow better and hold people's attention better without so many sound effects put in though. A few are good, like at the beginning and the end. It might be cool if at the end it was like the end of the day and the reverse of the beginning was there. An occasional sound in the middle would probably be okay, but too many and it seems to have a jarring movement. You're decision though.
Very original, very interesting.