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Everyone's voice echoes in the dark, open area. "Seriously, does anyone have a torch? this is getting creepy."
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"thanx" rick rubs it on his leg and went to throw it up to alice but alice missed it and it came back done and smacked rick in his head. "owwww my head"




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Alice climbs over the edge of the window and falls in, "ouch, s.o.b. that hurt"
I just lost the game.




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"Woah, this place is awesome. AH!" Bella falls down a hole and screams loudly. "And it ECHOES!" *echoes...echooes...echoes* "Cool!" *cool...cool...cool...* "Hey, where am I?" *I...I...I...I...*
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"A temple," Alice says as she stands up and rubs her neck.
I just lost the game.




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rick slips and falls down and crashes on the ground




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rick slips and falls down and crashes on the ground




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rick slips and falls down and crashes on the ground




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Roya slaps rick for posting multiple times in a row. "Stop it!" and then she scratches his eyes out.
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"Rick, you fell a lot!" *ot...ot...ot* Bella shouted. "Ouch...Guys, I can't move my leg. I think it's...owch...broken." *en...en...en*
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Royboy wrote:Roya slaps rick for posting multiple times in a row. "Stop it!" and then she scratches his eyes out.



it was an accident give me back my eye




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Rick lands next too bella "you ok"




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"Do I look ok? I can't move my freaking leg, NO I'M NOT OK!" *k...k...k...* Rick tries to move Bella's leg and she screams and smacks him. "OUCH! Don't touch it!"
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Alice looks at Bella's leg and casts heal on Rick so he gets his eye back. "He was going to fix it. Bella can you move your leg at all?"
I just lost the game.




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"Noooo...Alice it hurts!"
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