Help You

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My internal clock is slowly ticking
Time is flying by, but where is it going?
Seconds, minutes, hours, days, weeks, months, years
Waiting for something, but what?
A revolution that is either too soon to come
Or may never come at all

Something pulling at me beneath the surface
Drowning in a tangled mess of emotions
Another feeling of anger burning at me from the inside out
Hate, anger, rage, pain, sorrow
Emotions running haywire
Out of control, unspeakable truths
Waiting to be spoken

You build up courage, to say something you want so badly to say
Only to have your courage shot down
Only to cower in the face of your fears
It's controlling you, and you're letting it
It's overpowering you, and still you let it

You let your fear get the very best of you
Never thinking about the changes you can make
By just saying what's on your mind
Never looking back on what willpower and courage you had
You don't want to beleive you ever had it

Suffering alone, guilty of things you never did
But you still feel as if it's all your fault
Worthless? That may be how you feel
But there's at least one person
Who doesn't think that you are
There's at least one person
Who thinks highly of you, who wants to be just like you

One person, someone who idolizes you
Still feel alone? Maybe you do, maybe you don't
But you are never alone, even when nobody's home
Still feeling guilty? What are you guilty for?
Don't want to think about it?
Maybe it would be better if you did
Just think of everything you've never done
But somehow you felt like it was your fault

When somebody else got hurt
But you had nothing to do with it
When somebody was crying
And you felt there was nothing that you could do
To ease their pain, to take away their guilt
They could be just like you
Feeling worthless and alone

Still having second thoughts?
Still can't find it in you to say what you want to say?
I have a word of advice for you
It's not going to kill you, to speak out among the crowd
You have nothing to lose
By keeping everything bottled up inside
Cowaring still? please don't
You've got nothing to be afraid of
I'll help you along the way
Come, take my hand, I'll guide you through this
You're not alone

I'll always be with you, in your heart
In your mind...and if you so choose for me to be
I'll be there in your dreams
Still helping you along the way
Still guiding you through life

Step by step, day by day, page by page
In this chapter book of life
This beautifully chaotic mess of society
The one that leaves angelic scars
On the most flawless of bodies
The one that makes you cry
The velvet tears that keep falling from your beautiful eyes

Insecurity getting the best of you?
Let me help you overcome that insecurty
You don't have to hide if you don't want to
I promise I'll stay by your side
Just let me in, let me know you, the real you
Please don't hide from me
I'm not going to hurt you like everyone else has before

Are you scared to trust me? Scared I might abandon you too?
I promise that I wont
You may say you're nothing special
How can you beleive it's true?
Everyone is special in their own ways
Everyone has their inner beauty
Have you found yours? If not, just look deeper
Beleive me when I say it's there
You just have to look deeper

Take a look in the mirror
Look deep into your own eyes
Tell me, what do you see?
Do you see the person you want to be?
Maybe you see yourself pretending
To be something you're not
Are you truly happy? Are you happy with who you are?
I didn't think you would be

You want to be, I know you do
But you never will be, if you don't allow yourself to be
If you keep running away
From everyone who wants to love you
Everyone who wants to help
You have to try a little harder
To overcome your fears
Please don't be afraid...
You know I'm here to help you
What doesn't kill me will only make me stronger, wisdom comes with age and with wisdom comes great responsiblity and maturity.




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I like how this is talking to the reader, and the topic is good, but i feel that some of the lines are a little cliche such as:

To ease their pain, to take away their guilt
They could be just like you
Feeling worthless and alone

I dunno it might just be me but i feel like i have read things like this before.

Other than that i really liked this poem, its sad but also makes you feel somewhat safe? Haha might just be me again :P

Keep writing, you are clearly talented!

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