Three Edged Word

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For Shingi


Three edged word

A simple word
A single question
A thousand things unanswered.

I sit and think
I ask myself
Why you have to hurt her.

Is this for the future?
Is this an unmarked love?
Or do you really hate her,
Like your words and actions show?

“Useless child”
“Wretched girl”
Three edged words
They scar like hell.

A lonesome tear
A hidden pain.
A stab in the chest
A severed chain.

I sit, I watch
I hear, I feel.
The hurt you cause
May never heal.




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wow this was very good no it was better than good it was amazing.

Why you have to hurt her

but this line confused me some i had to read it a few times
but other tan that it was great so keep it up. :D
Everything is written in the sand but, it just depends on how you read it!
lot of love
erin
http://s167.photobucket.com/albums/u127/sufergirl_01/
you know you want to! lol



You flare, you flicker, you fade... And in the end, all your tomorrows become yesterdays.
— Megatron (Lost Light, by Roberts, Lawrence, Lafuente)