Avalanche

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I'm crying and
I have no idea why
I'm thinking thoughts
That don't even make sense
I'm just trying
To understand what's going on

CHORUS
The paint's been there forever
Now it's suddenly washed away
The mortar held this world together
Now it's crumbled and decay
And I'm trapped in the middle of this mess
I wonder if I'll have the chance
To escape...the avalanche

Faces I've known for years
Morph into Picasso paintings
It's all so strange
Yet I've seen all this before
Everything looks so wrong tonight...

(repeat chorus)

Rolling somewhere in the debris
Wondering if someone will save me
My world's crashing down
The edges are blurred
And I'm...all alone..

(repeat chorus)
"You do ill if you praise, but worse if you censure, what you do not understand." Leonardo Da Vinci

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i like how your songs like abstract in a good way but if you wanted to you could add more to the last few stanzas that would make it very nice
"I don't know what to say, so I'll just say what's in my heart... Baboom, Baboom, Baboom."
--Mel Brooks



The best books... are those that tell you what you know already.
— George Orwell, 1984