Mercy of the Sword Saint: Chapter 1

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I forgot how much I loved Phasmatis and Gleebeck. Or Phazzy and Gleeb, I should say. You're never going to forgive me for giving them those nicknames, are you? :lol:

Another beautifully crafted chapter, and though there were one or two typos--even your brilliance isn't immune to the hazards of the wicked keyboard--over all, there was nothing I'd say that needs major reworking. The pace was very relaxed, but knowing you things will speed up fantastically in the near future.

And Adam? Let's keep the critiques rated PG, yes?
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Education is education. We should learn everything and then choose which path to follow. Education is neither Eastern or Western; it is human.
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