life was meant.
to harness,to flow
our opinion is what we make it
and without us there would be no
and without our Creator there would be no us.
"There is adventure in simply being among those we love, and among the things we love -- and beauty, too."-Lloyd Alexander
I'm not a fan of your structure but you managed to fit it all in. I found it a little short though, perhaps more on this topic mixed with a little variety between the three last lines 
The flow is alright, but not tremendous. I'd recommend leaving the "and" out in the last two stanza's, cuts off the tacky
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