spare story, spare story?

Hey, everyone!

I want to get my fourth star very soon, especially since it's RevMo, so I am opening up this thread to (hopefully) get more reviews done!



What I'm looking for:

• short stories of any length
• early chapters of a novel (before chapter 5)
• free verse poetry
• essays or articles

What I am NOT looking for:

• later chapters in a novel
• structured poetry
• anything graphic (gore, anything sexual, etc)

Check out examples of my reviews here !!! : https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic/118037-the-swift-log-of-a-swift-fox#p1723685

Hello!!!

I have a story that desperately needs review lol. It's sci-fi, short (just under 9k words).

It's called On the Edges, and is in 2 parts in a folder on my profile.

I can link it if that's easier!

Ty in advance

@DomTheDumb, i'll check that out later today!

Cool!

Hi!!! I'm looking for some reviews/feedback on the first chapter of my sports fiction novel titled Exclusive Access!

To put it simply, the MC is an F1 driver, and the MC's love interest is a sports journalist. And yes, this story does contain fictionalized versions of real F1 drivers. The current chapter is just under 3,000 words, I believe!

Exclusive Access - Chapter 1 - Stupid Questions, Stupid Answers

Thank you in advance!!