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aviannnnn my lovely poetry buddy
i've been meaning to leave a comment on here for a while, so i'm just gonna insert my thoughts on all of these breathtaking poems :D
my body will be remembered here, in the way
i twist shattered things into creation.
...WHAT. this lowk made my heart stop for a second, honestly. throughout your thread you have these devastating metaphors and lines that make the rest of the poem that much more powerful.
also I lovelovelove the connection throughout with creation and inheritance. I know you haven't necessarily been doing a theme, but overall these poems just have this dark, blood-red depth to them.
[quote[we are recursive, propagating and dying
in different seasons. i think of you as tulips,
alive for the spring and dead for the year,[/quote]
THE NATURE CONNECTIONS >>>>>
i have always adored your heartbreak poems because I feel like you put such power and yet helplessness into them--and although I know the feelings behind them aren't amazing per se, you twist them into art. to quote you, you twist shattered things into creation, and that is what I love about your work.
I cannot wait to see more of this thread, I will be waiting with bated breath!! haunting your poetry till you can get it to the place you want it to be!!!
love ya, poetry buddy <3
