I need critique for my two original stories here, A Young Orphan Girl and A Swedish Surviving Family and I have issues with inspiration and coming up with titles and with smooth sentences too and how to get smooth sentences since it is a problem for me.
'The Answer to the Great Question... Of Life, the Universe and Everything... Is... Forty-two,' said Deep Thought, with infinite majesty and calm. — Douglas Adams, The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy
