Bradley the Tissue

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Awesome Snoink! This poem made me smile. :) <-- See.
It's amusing, short, simple and enjoyable. I'll definitely think twice before using a tissue. And who knows, someday I might run into poor little Bradley lying crumpled up and used. At the moment of the throwing away he was not used, am I correct?
I'm a godmother, that's a great thing to be, a godmother. She calls me god for short, that's cute, I taught her that.
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WOW!! nothing else I can say. You are very creative and I really really love your peom!! It made me cheerful and gave me a smile!
"The early bird gets the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese."




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Best.
Limerick.
Ever.
No joke.

I loved this.
Yay! :D




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Hi, Snoink, OMG HAHAHAHAHA!!! This is the cutest little poem I have ever read!!!! I absolutely fell in love with it!
The concept/ idea is so fantastic, telling the poem from the perspective of a tissue. AMAZING! It is a sad little piece almost dull but still very good. It is so short and cute I don’t want you to change anything. But maybe next time expand a bit on one line just to make emphasis on the sadness.
All in all it is a great poem. I look forward to reading more of your work...
Thanx,
Watchmeburn
"The early bird gets the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese."



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