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Fand
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Sat Sep 30, 2006 8:58 pm
Fand
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Sat Sep 30, 2006 8:58 pm
Had to delete it due to the rules of a contest I entered this poem in... sorry!
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Fand
on Fri Dec 22, 2006 12:19 am, edited 1 time in total.
Bitter Charlie
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Caligula's Launderette
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Sat Sep 30, 2006 11:46 pm
Caligula's Launderette
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Sat Sep 30, 2006 11:46 pm
Beautiful as always, hon.
I am torn between telling you that you need more punctuation in the second stanza, and telling you it's fine the way it is.
How about that for some constructive criticism.
Kelle
Fraser
: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser
: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(
Due South
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Hatter:
Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (
Alice
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