Autumn Sheds

It’s the staring out the window,
The view given by nature
and all its belongings.

Autumn breaks
And sheds its leaves,
Take aware the season’s welcome,
Remember its brave departure.
Cause autumn sheds in harmony,
Fulfills the longing for what’s to come;
“The summer’s bliss and blossom”

Autumn, season where nature sows,
Pleasant, peaceful memories
Waiting to be relived.

I found this cool background that fits this poem decided to give it a show

Wonderful imagery, and great title. Watch your punctuation in a few places, especially the semicolon. I love the last stanza. What a wonderful way to describe it, 'waiting to be relived'.

Beautiful work.

I love autumn and the picture created from reading this.

i love autumn too.
The crispy orange leaves... love crunching them under my feet.
Anyway,
Great imagery. Made me all warm and fuzzy
*hug for your great work!*
lexy x

I loved it! Especially the rythm of leaves and harmony in this stanza:

Autumn breaks
And sheds its leaves,
Take aware the season’s welcome,
Remember its brave departure.
Cause autumn sheds in harmony,
Fulfills the longing for what’s to come;
“The summer’s bliss and blossom”

Great Job! =)