Shadow Dance (my poem) please review!

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firefaery
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Fri Sep 08, 2006 12:10 am
firefaery says... · Fri Sep 08, 2006 12:10 am
Hello, I'm firefaery, and I just joined. I would like feedback on my poem, Shadow Dance, posted in the Dramatic Poetry poem. It is one of my better works. Its kinda long, has rythm, and is rather dark. Please take a peek and let me know what you think! Honesty is appreciated! :)
I am also on writing.com, veiw my full portfolio at writing.com/authors/firefaery
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Sometimes I'm terrified of my heart; of its constant hunger for whatever it is it wants. The way it stops and starts.
— Poe