~nariel~

I like going to: . It has fantasy name generators, Japanese name generators, French name generators, evil name generators. It's fun to see what it comes up with. It's helped ...

Lol. Very interesting. The dog’s fur was rough and mangled with all different kinds of dirt, mud, bugs. Add an 'and' after mud. Was this what I was afraid of? ...

I've recently found a music album that really inspires me to write. I was wondering if it was okay to use the song titles as chapter names. The story doesn't ...

Yet another great poem. Its building up inside me, Its should be it's. I got to see the pretty little picture, Above your final place. This was my favorite part. ...

I can totally relate to this poem. Weclome to YWS by the way. I think this is an excelent poem that tells readers what watching a loved one waste away ...

Hi lakegirls! I haven't seen you in a while. Hmmm, this poem was very interesting. I'm not sure about punctuation in poems, so I'll leave that to another reviewer. Now, ...

Hello, welcome to YWS. As Olivia said, you need to do two reviews before you post anything else. I took a peek at your story and I reviewed most of ...

Okay, I really really really liked this. It was really deep and it just makes so much sense. I especially liked the first few lines. They rocked. Maybe you did ...

Ha ha. That made me laugh (in a good way). This was a change from your mysterious first chapter. It was much more upbeat and lighthearted. I liked it very ...

To tell you the truth, I completely forgot about this story. I almost screamed when I saw it. :oops: Thanks for your comment though and I'll TRY to write more ...

Nah, this is too good to rip apart. :wink: Welome to YWS and this is really good, considering it's your first post. I'm pleased to see that you've already done ...

Hey welcome to YWS, my name is nariel and I'll be reviewing your story today. Both of them were chatting, taking quick glances at her, but it was mainly from ...

Hey, welcome to YWS! I see you already have one review, but you need two before you post something else. Thanks for doing at least one though! :) This was ...

First post? Wow! It's very good for your first ever post. I liked all the emotions and descriptions in this. I felt very close to your MC; I felt all ...

Ohhhhhh! Oops. *Facepalm* Sorry, that makes more sense now. That makes a ton more sense. Sorry bout that, ~N~