~Volant~

haha. I don't really know what Paco means; I only know it's a hispanic nickname for Francisco. lol. :D If it does mean "big fish," I'll probably change that. heh. ...

Yes, actually, they would. The point of the arena is to put the students in as a realistic battle as possible. But thank you very much for pointing that out. ...

Omg, I didn't realize i didn't do that! :shock: head/desk *changes that little thing :D* Also, there will be swearing later on. I try to avoid that as much as ...

Editted! is it any better?

Darn it, I was trying to make the bleeding fingers as not-scary as possible....dang. It was creepier when I wrote it late at night, but I guess it didn't work ...

oooh, the second book, Wizard Heir , is probably even better! (Thought it's waaaaay more predictable than the first, but still really good) There's more romance in that one than ...

True. So totally true. I wouldn't exactly call it a story, though. But I'd bet you could make this into a wicked poem!

yeah, pretty tight trick with the tea-bag, huh? However, I agree with what everyone else said. This is an indented story. A very good story, and a very good poem, ...

Wait, Myles has a broadsword?! Since when can an old man handle a flipping braodsword ?! Other than that, I really liked this. nice battlescene, by the way. Apparently, according ...

As to Master Dario being annoying, he's supposed to be that way. Kearin is a cocky character; she would not go well with a Dumbledore-type mentor. I needed someone who ...