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Re: detail-dumping - rated for language
I hate it when you get overloaded on information. It is so annoying and confuzzling. I rarely read prologue. :roll:
Apr 22, 2006 -
Re: When men cry...
That is tough. I'd just say that he wept or something like that. I don't know really I haven't ever had to describe that in any of my writing. Or ...
Apr 22, 2006
