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Re: Hey there! I'm new =]
Welcome to YWS. If you love to write and you can't live without it then you are at the right place! I hope you enjoy it here! If you have ...
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: Lovely Waters #1
Chapter 1 I glared at the tiled floor angrily avoiding anyone's gaze. My nails dug into the palm of my hands as my fist tightened. "Ellie? Ellie! Where are your ...
Jun 4, 2008 -
Re: Head Injuries
Well, there are such things as miracles so I guess so... Yeah, no I think about it, most definately! Paw
May 27, 2008 -
Re: new peice --- The Pit.
“Hey! Yeah, you move.” Said a man with long unruly grey hair and a face you don’t want to look at. Is it suppose to sound odd when the man ...
May 24, 2008 -
Re: Trapped...
Asha~ Asha just stared at the humans, unmoving. "You will begin to change soon and you will be one of us" she said, loud enough for everyone to hear. *sorry, ...
Mar 16, 2008 -
Re: Trapped...
"Just exploring near the barriers," Asha answers walking past Naomi. Naomi let go of the branch and flipped so that her feet landed on the ground. "Anything new pass through?" ...
Mar 14, 2008 -
Re: Trapped...
I have decided to start writing since no one started yet. I just wrote this to understand the "other world" better Asha sneaked away from her hut and quietly made ...
Mar 14, 2008 -
Re: Trapped...
well since we have five humans now, we can start on the story!
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: Trapped...
we need three more humans!
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: Trapped...
Name:Asha Age: 750 (15) Gender: Female breed: A Blue Skin Personality: Quiet and gentle. Loves to explore near the barrier Appearance: She has rich blue skin, violet eyes, sliver-white hair, ...
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: Trapped...
Ok lets see if this works. So, a group of 5 friends decide to go into a forest. They heard stories of people being taken by "spirits" when they venture ...
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: an incedent
First of all I'm not good at critiquing, but I will do my best! I liked the last line the best. I thought it was pretty clver when you said ...
Jan 13, 2008 -
Re: Field Trip Part 1
I'm glad I don't ride a bus or go to feild trips that often! This sacred me. It was really good. I liked how you described how disgusting Jen was. ...
Jan 5, 2008 -
Re: Paper clips and rubber bands
I was cracked before you And I was shattered after you FOr some reason, this was my favorite line. It also flowed really well. The whole song was pretty good ...
Jan 5, 2008 -
Re: An Anime Drawing I did a While Back
Thats really good! Wow! I love it~!
Jan 5, 2008
