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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Touching the Sky

    Great poem! I really like the way you showed how growing up you leave some things behind in pursuit of others. One thing I thought you could change was how ...

    Feb 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: A War Within My Head

    First of all great poem! One thing I noticed while reading this was that there were a few not capitalized Is, other than that there isn't much I can see ...

    Feb 27, 2015


The grand in the hotel rings with broken tunes; the guests frown; the concierge winces. But the blue-hatted boy is happy and braver than they.
— TheMythMaster