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Hey Socks, Thanks for the review. I thought it was weird that you said it was short because my chapters are usually super long, then I checked my post and ...

Skiiiiiins! Thanks for another review! :D You said correct you if you're wrong, so here I am :P Fun fact: I'm from good ol' 'straya (more formally known as Australia), ...

Thanks, Skins! The next chapter is up, and it follows directly on from this one, so you might want to read the last few paragraphs of this one just to ...

Thanks Skins! Haha, don't look so shocked, the first chapter mentioned that he's killed someone ;) I definitely should've mentioned Abigail sooner, especially since the whole thing with Alexis would ...

Thanks for the review, Birkhoff! I chuckled to myself a little bit when you mentioned Kate from Lost - I love that show, and she's my favorite character! But I ...

Thanks for the review and welcome to YWS! I'm fairly new as well. And no need to apologize, your review was excellently written and very informative for me! I always ...

Thanks for the reviews! Your enthusiasm is motivating! Chapter three is up if you're interested - And I totally agree with you about Raven's 180. It was unrealistic. I'm going ...

Thanks for the review! Yeah, it seems like I always have an issue with balancing dialogue and description, it's especially terrible in first drafts like this. Also I think those ...

Thanks for the review! I'm not sure why I didn't like this chapter, I think I just got bored reading it over and over when I was editing. The next ...

Hey, Skins! Just call him Daine, I always do :) Thanks for your review! The next chapter is up.... and I'm afraid its maybe not my best work... lets see ...

The next chapter is now up!

oops sorry, I guess my brain just skimmed over your little note about the literature class thing. My bad!

Hey Skins! Wow, thanks for being my first loyal reader and sticking around. (By the way, is there a story behind the name "Skins"? It sounds interesting). It's cool that ...

Thanks for the review! Also, sorry for the confusion, there were a few details I left out. Such as, you're correct in thinking that Raven and Alexis are only half-sisters. ...

Thanks! Chapter three is up now if you want to check it out