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Thank you for the reviews. I'll take into consideration your suggestions. However, I will like to defend my story by saying that this is not the whole story, perhaps my ...

This is a scene from a novel I'm currently editing. I just thought of leaving it from some critique. Since it's just a scene, you should know that the initial ...

I know your trying to go for a memoir and therefore you want to focus on the feelings and the thoughts that went through in the very moment that all ...

Hi! I really liked your story. I think your use of imagery is just mesmerizing. As I read I could understand how he found the rain so magical. I would ...

Hi Writersdomain, I saw your PM before I saw this message. Again thanks for the welcome. I like to write different stuff but mostly romance and horror or romance with ...

1.) What is your favorite author/book? 2.) Favorite color? 3.) Do you prefer to hand-write or type? 4.) Choose one. Pirates or Ninjas? 5.) What is your biggest pet peeve? ...

I liked reading this story. I think it has potential, but it needs some work. Like Juniper said, you were trying to create a strong impact on the audience but ...

I loved the Hunger Games. Every chapter ends in total suspense, making the book very addictive. It kept me on the edge of my seat with every passing moment. And ...

Hi Amy! My Nano went great! I did 54k and loved it, though it needs a lot of editing. Nice to meet you.

Hi, My name is Zora, and yes, like I said I'm new. I heard about this site in Nanowrimo and I just thought I'd stopped by and check it out. ...