zoorah12

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Sure thing. I didn't think I would get a response this fast! I should have it done in a day or so.... I'm a bit overloaded with midterms right now. ...

Hey all! If you want to receive an in-depth review... just drop your story by! I can promise that I will have it all torn up for you in at ...

Please.

Thanks!

I'll do my best

Wow, this is excellent. I really enjoyed it. Now, I don't usually do grammar critiques. I like to give a readers opinion to the author, not an editors. I really ...

This is good. Apart from a few grammatical mistakes, I really enjoyed this. There were times when you would end a quote with ." so and so said. It is ...

Thanks, it means allot to get good reviews from fellow writers!

Thank you both for the informative critiques! Scarecrow, I am with you. A story revolving around a boy getting bullied at school would bore me too. Him getting into fights ...

The first chapter of my working novel. I know that it does not reflect the title at all... yet. As I post more of it and you read it, hopefully, ...

Well... This is certainly an interesting story. There isn't much more I can fix differently from the people above, although I would still like to give you some advice. You ...

The Villa On The Mountainside Black clouds roll in over the mountain, bearing the first rain of the summer. The freezing rain plummets towards the earth, shattering like glass as ...

This is an updated version from the original post "Fantasy Novel" I have made changes based on the critiques I have received and have also posted more. Critiques are greatly ...